Kenneth Lawson: Family Tradition

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Family Tradition

Kenneth Lawson

The old radio brought back memories. 

Deep in the recess of his mind, he remembered hearing the old music blaring from the speaker of his grandfather’s radio. Today music played on gadgets that did things that would shock his grandfather. Sometimes, it shocked him.

Turning on the old radio, he fiddled with the dial. Eventually, the static became sounds, and music from his grandfather’s favorite radio filled the air. However, now the station played not the big-band music of bygone times, but something his grandson called hip-hop spilled from the speakers. Whatever it was, he hated it and switched it off immediately.

“At least it still works.” He leaned back in the old chair and closed his eyes.

Memories from another time came floating back to him. The image of his grandfather sitting in the very chair he sat in smoking a pipe, the aroma of cherry tobacco drifting with the smoke. As he pounded away on the keys of a typewriter, the radio would be playing Glenn Miller or Tommy Dorsey. His dad sat in the chair in later years, and tunes from Count Basie and Ella Fitzgerald drifted from that old radio. He had listened to Maynard Ferguson, Herbie Mann, and Buddy Rich. The good old days of music.

It occurred to him that he must have been about the same age as his youngest grandson was now when he stood in the office, nervous and in awe of his grandfather. The memories hung around after more than half a century of living. Now he was almost as old as his grandfather would have been at the time. 

He gazed about the old office while idly playing with the glass tumbler that sat on the desk. His grandfather and father and he drank from that tumbler as they wrote, he chuckled, their ‘masterpieces.’ It was a permanent fixture on the desk, as was the bottle of whiskey or rye, or whatever the drink of the week was. He had stopped drinking decades ago but found comfort by the presence of a familiar habit. 

He bore the name of his father and grandfather—Franklin James Reed, but he was now the oldest living Franklin James and had carried the nickname FJ from childhood. A good thing because everyone knew who he was.

He chuckled. “Yeah, everyone knows who I am, but do I?” That was the question he asked himself daily. 

Straightening up in the chair, he gazed about the old office. It was much like a time capsule, and the deeper you looked into the long narrow room, the further you traveled back in time. The trophies and artifacts of three long careers filled every nook and cranny. The room was longer than wide and felt more like stepping into a hallway that dead-ended with a shelved cabinet against the back wall. 

At least a dozen typewriters, cameras, and old film projectors sat on the shelves. Three lifetimes of work crammed into an office. One electric typewriter, his, sat among the older versions, a small contribution to the “museum,” as he called the office.

His grandfather set up the office in the latter part of the 1930s when he started working for the London Times and freelancing for the wire services. After the war, he began writing books, eventually becoming a bestselling author. Several of his books turned into movies in the 1960s. After his grandfather’s death, his father had taken over the office and used it for his writing. 

While his grandfather wrote stories of spies and the government agencies of his days, his father told a different kind of tale. His books were about the everyday man and his struggle to cope with a changing world. He also wrote a few spy novels. FJ’s father’s books sold well, with two movies made from his books. Not as successful as his grandfather, but enough to give his father much the same credibility his grandfather had earned. 

He, too, had followed the family tradition and became an author of spy novels as well. His best and most significant creation had been the detective series he’d created in the sixties. Eventually, it became a series and a movie. The royalties had paid for the restoration of the estate. He renovated the entire house except for the “museum.” He wanted the room as he had always remembered it, faded wallpaper, drapes, and worn carpet with the lingering scent of smoke, coffee, and whiskey. 

FJ ran his fingertips along the face of the radio as memories flooded his mind. Toward the end of his life, his grandfather had asked him to write a book with him. He had done so, but his grandfather’s style was archaic to him as a young writer. He had not enjoyed the process and vowed to never co-write with anyone again. But after grandfather Franklin passed, FJ’s father found his last unfinished manuscript in one of the drawers. Together, FJ and his dad spent the next six months finishing the book, a challenge neither of them would forget. They thought they would never write together again, but they started a new project together a year later. That effort went well and the critical response was better than expected, so they wrote more books together over the next several years. Then his father passed away some years before, and he was writing alone again. 

He picked up a photo of his children and grandchildren that sat on the desk. His family rarely visited the old estate. His children and grandchildren had shown no interest in writing or any creative endeavor. Instead, they focused their lives on technology and many of the trappings that went with it. He thought about all the words written within this old room and the stories that he had yet to tell, but the three generations of writers in the family would end when he passed. 

Lost in thought, FJ jumped when a quiet knock on the door interrupted his reprieve. Who was here? He wasn’t expecting anyone. Turning the chair to face the room, he found his voice.

“Hello?” 

The door squeaked as it swung open a crack. “Grandpa?” He recognized the voice of his oldest grandchild, Lewis Reed.

 “Yes, please come in.” He straightened up in his chair and leaned forward on the desk.

The door opened slowly, and Lewis walked in slowly. “Grandpa, I wanted to show you this. I—I wrote it.” He had a sheaf of papers in his hand.

“Come here. I don’t bite. Please show me.” Lewis gingerly held out the papers for him, and he eagerly took them.

“It’s a story. I wrote it,” Lewis repeated.

“Mmmm, yes, I see that.” 

Energy returned to his old bones as he read the story while Lewis stood in front of the desk nervously shifting his weight from one foot to another and looking around the room.

When he finished, FJ looked up over the papers at his grandson. “It has good bones. There’s a good story in here, but it needs work. If you’d like, I’d love to help you work on it and teach you.”

Lewis shook his head yes, as a big grin spread across his face.

“Lewis, You were scared to show me.”

Again only a nod in response.

“I don’t blame you. Your great-granddad, granddad, and then me are all successful writers. Understandably, you were scared to try.” He pointed to the chair. “Sit down, Lewis. Don’t be scared of me. I’m old, but I’m not fragile. If your writing weren’t good, I’d have said so. The truth of the matter is I wasn’t always that good. I sucked a lot, sometimes my stuff still sucks, but I keep writing. You’ve already done the hard part. You showed it to me.”

FJ glanced over at his grandfather Franklin James Reed’s old radio. He needed to get that radio refurbished. Maybe new speakers needed to play some hip-hop for his grandson to enjoy. After all, that radio was part of the family tradition.


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Calliope Njo: My New Radio

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My New Radio

Calliope Njo

Everybody piled into the lawyer’s office, which was about the size of a standard closet, with no room to sit. We had to listen to a man in a blue suit read five pages worth of words that could’ve been summed up. Then I wouldn’t have had to stand there and listen to him drone on about a guy I didn’t know.

For some reason, he left me his radio. Mom and Dad got cash, but how much, they never told me. Alex got his baseball card collection. I got a stinkin’ Philco Cathedral Vintage radio that dear old Grandfather bought for seventy dollars. A little envelope attached contained a note which stated that fact. What was I going to do with it?

I tried trading with Alex. I even tried the you’re such a great brother to help a poor and innocent lady like me. He laughed and smiled. “Keep dreaming.”

Mom and Dad were about the same except they added the how treasured you felt when you received such a fine gift lecture. So, I got stuck with the heap of junk.

I plugged in the radio to see if it worked. No sound except static, so I unplugged the radio and thought maybe the little thing would be a neat little decoration piece.

I tried everywhere in my apartment, but it didn’t fit. Everything was glass, granite, stainless steel, and concrete. That old hunk of junk stuck out. It didn’t even work. I got the note again, and it said never set the dial to nine hundred.

I had Pandora, so why did I need something so old, anyway. Maybe I could sell it. I could buy a set of speakers with the money. Maybe even some new clothes or whatever. Anything as long as I could get rid of it.

Nobody in my family wanted Grandfather’s radio. That meant selling the damn thing.

I waited a month and someone offered to buy it for seven hundred dollars as long as it was in pristine condition. No scratches or dings because I inspected the damn thing myself. So if nothing showed up in the pictures, that was how it was going to be.

I shipped it to the buyer only to have it come back to me not even two weeks later. When I checked my email that day, one of them turned out to be from that thing’s new owner.

You keep it. I don’t want it. You never said it was haunted. You keep the money. Keep it. The next guy may not be so nice so I suggest taking it off Ebay.

That bunch of BS again. Nothing was possessed. All a bunch of special effects and people paid to lie. If that were true, the world would be overpopulated with a bunch of spirits walking around. Whatever. I found a box and stuck it in my closet while waiting for a new buyer.

It felt good to be back at work again. That was until I got called into the big office. My boss told me that it was required that I attend a conference in Seattle. There was no way I was flying anywhere. I hated flying and airports. It took too long, nobody listened, and everything was disgusting.

Why couldn’t we work out a video conference? They accepted that suggestion, didn’t think they would. They even set up a room. That meant I had to pay attention and take notes without goofing around. They watched me through closed-circuit television to observe and evaluate for future reference.

Three days I listened to a tedious lecture about how bugs gave us a story if we only listened. The only reason I did it, they paid me extra for it. Otherwise, I would’ve been playing an online game to pass the time.

With that done, I went home and went online to order a big burger feast. Chocolate shake and all.

Dinner finished, I fell on the bed face first, knowing that I had everything under control. The only bummer was not being able to accomplish that from home. I worked for them so I had to do it their way or starve.

With the summary done and saved to thumb drive, some noise started. Like someone crunching up paper in my ear. It had to be my imagination. Not enough coffee this morning or something. I would’ve gone out for Starbucks, but given the hour, they were closed.

Black and bitter was the way to go. A lot of people described it as burned, but not to me. I set up my Keurig instead. That noise started up again. It didn’t stop. If I had to guess, it got louder.

I followed the noise hoping to find it. That radio that old geezer left me. One way to stop it was to get rid of it. I picked it up and threw it in the dumpster. No more noise and no more problems. I hoped to gain from it, but if it was making trouble, the money wouldn’t be worth it.

My great and fabulous plan came to a screeching halt when it flew out of the dumpster and zapped me. I dropped it on the ground and it didn’t break. It sort of floated down. Sparks came up from it.

Not my problem. I walked away for somebody else to clean it up. It could rot and disintegrate for all I cared.

With the laundry started, I went back to the kitchen to get something to eat. A frozen pizza sounded good. There were vegetables on it even. The onions had to count for a vegetable. They came from the ground. Oh, and the tomato sauce had to count.

The only problem was it took so long for it to finish. I should’ve ordered it instead. Then I wouldn’t have had to cook anything.

Pizza done at last, I got it out of the oven. I dropped it on the counter with it being so hot when that noise started.

“Dammit. I got rid of you.” It caused so much trouble it made me go insane.

I went outside and that radio floated in front of my door.

The dial turned back and forth. “You. Forgot. Me. Not. Again. Yours. Always.”

I shut the door on it. I hallucinated everything. Maybe I should sue someone for drugging their food. That was the only explanation. I took a few deep breaths. I had to stay calm and stop thinking nonsense. If they went, where would I go? I would be blacklisted for the rest of my life. They couldn’t be responsible.

That noise got louder and louder. I couldn’t even hear myself think. Maybe I could break it into tiny little pieces and get rid of it that way. I got the heaviest mug I had and returned to the door. It disappeared. Radios didn’t have wings so how could it go away?

I slammed the door shut and returned to my computer. I found a video app that I could watch something on for free. Not a great show but it was something to pass the time.

Something hovered around me. I didn’t see it but I felt it. When that movie finished, I scrolled the available choices. I felt it again before it showed itself on my monitor.

Deep breath in and out. Then my screen changed to a movie again. I sunk into the chair when I realized it was a commercial. After the intro of the next movie started, something banged on my door.

I opened it and there was that radio.

“You. Need. Me. Coming. In.”

It floated inside until it reached the kitchen counter. Then some sort of music I never heard before played. Then according to the radio announcer, they were going to play the Limits Of Love soap opera.

It didn’t sound familiar unless it was so antiquated that only the elderly would know. I looked it up to find out it was popular during World War II. It gave people something positive to look forward to, it seemed.

It zapped me when I tried to turn the dial off. Then I picked it up to try and throw it against something but it didn’t move. Before it had a chance, I grabbed the heaviest object I had and dropped it on the radio.

It didn’t break, but that noise. That awful good-for-nothing noise. Holy cow it kept getting louder and louder. If it would only stop.

The only time it ever quit was when I let it inside. I didn’t want to do that anymore. Maybe it would rain and it would short circuit.

Wait a minute. This was June so no chance of that happening. Damn.

I screamed for about a minute before it stopped. Then sirens sounded. I opened the door to find out what happened and nothing.

Out of desperation and out of ideas, I looked at it with clenched hands. “Why won’t you leave me alone?”

“No. One. Wants. Me. Any. More.” Then it cried a bit before it fell to the floor. It shattered into a lot of little pieces before turning to dust. A mini cyclone blew up the dust for about a minute before it died and fell to the floor.

I turned on the iRobot and told it to vacuum up the pile. With that gone, I could go on with my life. Done. Gone. Over with. I’ve had it.

Why did life have to be so complicated? I screamed as loud as I could.

Not sure what happened after that. The representation of the universe above my couch was my point of interest. I found myself staring at it.

I turned off everything and went to bed. Nothing more to do. Everything was done.

It was a Friday and it seemed to be a long time coming. With the report turned in, I went back to my desk. I got called back to the boss’ office to talk about the meeting. We finished when the clock struck twelve.

My boss offered to buy me lunch. That almost never happened so I accepted. It seemed he liked my idea of vid-conferencing instead of flying to different places. So that was a nice way to finish the week.

Six o’clock and all was well. Friday night meant Chinese takeout and a movie. After getting the food, I brought it home and turned on my computer. There had to be a movie on.

A movie did come on but my carrier must’ve been working on something because I lost my internet. After the last fortune cookie, I turned it back on again.

I expected the same site to turn up once I got onto the internet again but it wasn’t. Some sort of show turned up instead. This one talked about haunted things and haunted places. I almost spit out my coffee when I heard that.

About to bring up my search engine, they started talking about a mysterious radio that disappeared after the Korean War. The owner’s wife was into dark magic, and the only thing in the room she was practicing on was a radio, they felt it would have been the only thing to absorb any misdirected magic.

They could’ve been talking about my radio. The picture looked the same. Too late, since it turned to dust. I didn’t want to deal with it any more.

The search engine brought up free movie sites and I clicked one of them. I didn’t want to hear any more of that. That was enough. Granted something strange did happen but not enough for me to become a true believer.

I fell asleep with dreams of sleeping in until noon. Then that noise again. It couldn’t be. That radio didn’t exist anymore. It wasn’t anything any more because it got vacuumed up.

With one eye open, I turned on the light and that vacuum cleaner sat by my bed. The noise was coming from the vacuum instead of the radio.

“That’s it. I’ve had it. I can’t take it any more.” I grabbed the vacuum cleaner, went outside, and slam dunked it into the garbage bin. If someone wanted it, by all means. They could have it.

I went back to bed and all was well.

Mom called me to invite me over to do a little shopping while Dad and Alex went to a game. OK. I needed to get away from everything to decompress.

We spent the better part of the morning shopping. Lunch sounded like a good idea when we realized we needed a break. A little fish-and-chips place was our choice.

“So, how are you doing? Am I going to be welcoming a son-in-law? Hmm?” Mom’s eye twinkled. Together with that smile of hers, she had to be up to something.

“Why didn’t you ever tell me that I had a grandfather? I didn’t know.”

Mom picked up her cup of coffee and looked at me over the brim. “Well. You know. Nobody wants to admit that they have a loon in the family. He was never in his right mind. He always claimed he saw ghosts.”

She had a point. 

“And I’m doing a lot better since I got rid of that radio. It wouldn’t stop. Before you send me to the insane asylum, hear me out. I have to wonder how he came into possession of that thing. According to a show, it used to belong to someone who practiced black magic. If there is such a thing. Know anything about that?”

“Well, it was your gift. You were probably the one he had any contact with. Rumor had it he was a monster. Well, technically he was like you and me but something happened to make people believe that. Done dear? I have one more store to go.”

So much for getting answers and she already mentioned something like that. I spent the next couple of hours thinking about how such a radio could come into existence. The only consolation I had was, it no longer caused issues. It died.

I came home about mid-afternoon empty-handed while Mom bought an entire closet’s worth of clothes. I couldn’t stop thinking about everything that had happened so far.

Monday morning came and it was back to work. My boss informed me that I got a pay raise as a result of doing the work. My next assignment was to use what I learned and create something new and exciting for the public to respond to. He had faith in me that I could do it.

He might but I didn’t. I had no idea how to accomplish what he wanted. I had until the end of the day to create brainstorming ideas to let him know I was indeed working on it. Eh, another day to get done.

I dropped into a minimart to pick up some food. I got home and got settled. About to eat, music came from somewhere. No electronic devices of any kind were on except for household appliances. So where it came from I had no idea.

I got up and turned toward the counter. “No! How?”

The radio played while a smile formed on the front. “We. Now. Return. You. To. Your. Program.”

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Riham El-Ashry: On the Shelf

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On the Shelf

Riham El-Ashry

Amm Khalil stopped in front of his small shop gasping and coughing. His age was not a hurdle; almost seventy-five and he was still able to run his business. It was a very early hour; a part of his daily routine was to take a walk after the dawn prayer. The morning fresh, unspoiled air revived his full-of-tobacco lungs and resuscitated his lame limbs. And although his pace was weak, he seemed to arrive earlier than he should have. The narrow, meandering street was still asleep. None of the other shops and stores were open yet. 

He listened; there was no sound. Silence. Trying to recall: the radio broke yesterday and needed to be repaired. Usually, he would leave his radio on even when the shop was closed. It irritated him now—this silence; however, taking it to a friend wasn’t a bad idea at all. Sometimes, he wished the old device would break or stop so that he would pay a visit to his friend who, Khalil insisted, was the only one who could handle such a very old radio. His old friend, Bayoumi, was the only one alive from his youth. Memories found their way to his heart and forced a delightful smile on his lips which almost disappeared under his big mustache. His reminiscent thoughts promised him an entertaining afternoon. 

He remembered the first day his father brought it, almost forty years ago. And though Khalil was not a kid then, he was thrilled when the device started producing sounds. Many gathered in this same shop: the grocery keeper, some vendors, a few customers, and the coffee shop boy. Everyone was amazed and liked to hang around it. There were nights when they listened to Asset Umm Kulthum and her astounding performance of her famous songs that rendered the listeners, either in the theatre or through the radio, in a state of joyous ecstasy. There was the news of wars: the defeat that shattered their hearts and their pride, and there was the victory that cost many lives. But the news of his young brother’s death was not announced on the radio. It arrived in a military letter one day. Khalil had to read the letter to his father and carry the dreadful news to his mother. It was such a unique, hideous afternoon. It was silent. Silence. Everything was quiet; vehicles, buses, people, birds were unable to produce any sounds, except for that same radio which was tuned to the Quran station. 

He rested his right hand on the metallic door and caught his breath. Some memories were exhausting as if he lived them again. Amm Khalil sighed and took out the keys and knew he couldn’t wait for his son to help him. His assistant was energetic and never late, but Amm Khalil had to let him go after failing to pay the boy’s salary for three successive months. Who would care to have their clothes sewn by a tailor anymore in the late 90s? Or maybe it was true that he had lost his touch and that was why the number of his customers declined radically in the past couple of years. 

With some uncomfortable crouching and lifting, he did the job rather in a hurry; he hated that someone would see him struggling even to do a simple task and then blame him for being impatient or not asking for help. The thing that hurt him the most was someone accusing him of being old and foolish. Deep in his mind he admitted it: he could not run a tailor’s shop at this age. Yes! What would it be like while he could not even thread a needle? Or draw a proper pattern? His hands shook when handling the scissors. He loved his profession and hoped his son would master it; however, this was too much to wish for. 

The sun cast its light into the dark shop. Sniffing the smell of cloth and new fabric, he cautiously stepped inside. He collected some pieces of silk and linen to clear his seat. Opposite him stood a mannequin with an unfinished chiffon dress. If it weren’t for the blemish on the right sleeve, it would have been in a pretty lady’s closet. The old tailor thought of it as his last masterpiece; the design was outstanding—a proof of his unique talent. Unfortunately, a trifle flaw spoiled it, and it remained there, a witness of unachievable goals. 

“Do you still insist on repairing this junk?” Ahmad asked, watching his father holding the radio. “There is no use. It’s very old.” 

“I’m sure it could be fixed.” 

“Better take it to the Antiquities museum.” Khalil shook his head slowly and turned towards the door. “Wait! What is your final decision?” 

“Thinking.” 

“If we sell this shop, we’ll have enough to start a new business.” Ahmad had to shout as his father hurried down the street. 

It wasn’t long before Khalil returned with the radio wrapped exactly as he started off with it. Carefully, he placed it on the shelf, took a long look at it. His eyes, full of tears, stared at the sewing machine. 

“It looks the same to me,” smirked Ahmad. 

“Yes, it is. Bayoumi couldn’t fix it.” Khalil’s voice fainted. “And he won’t be able to do anything anymore.” 

Khalil turned his back leaving his son surprised. Wearily, he headed towards the corniche and took the seat where he used to spend time with Bayoumi. It was hot, but he seemed not to notice. A yellowish leaf waved in the breeze and fell into the river. The water drifted the leaf toward the north, towards the end of the river. He gazed up at the tree and noticed another that was about to fall. He smiled and tracked the floating leaf patiently. It felt that life was draining out and losing any meaning. Travelling to the unknown was an inevitable journey. 

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SUCCESS PHILOSOPHIES WITH DR. CHUBACK EPISODE #11

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Cheryl Ann Guido: Swing

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Swing

Cheryl Ann Guido

Lucy Landon sat in her basement, head in hands. Every year since she started high school it had been the same. The annual father/daughter dance, one of the highlights of the school year, was held on the basketball court under the evening stars and she had no escort. Her father abandoned their family long ago and her mother had never remarried.

This year the theme of the event was 1940s swing dancing. Having grown up watching old movies from that time period, the thought of jitterbugging across a dance floor with a talented partner seemed like great fun and as a Senior, this chance would never happen again. Snorting loudly, Lucy silently cursed her father for leaving. After his departure, her poor mother had struggled to raise three children of which Lucy was the eldest. Her mom loved them all more than anything and did all she could to be both mother and father in addition to working full time as a waitress in one of the town’s high-end restaurants. Although the tips were outstanding, aging and constantly being on her feet had taken a toll over the years and Lucy knew that soon after high school graduation, she would have to find a job to help pay the bills. There would be no college for her unless she could find a way to pay for online courses and to do that, she needed a job.

Growing up, the basement of their modest home had become her sanctuary. The other family members rarely ventured down into the large unfinished dark place unless they needed to retrieve something stored there so she enjoyed complete privacy. Lucy had cleared and claimed a small area for herself, tacking posters of movie stars and pop stars onto the exposed solid beams. On impulse, she had strung old brightly colored Christmas lights across one of the horizontal beams, giving the area a soft warm glow. She had covered a worn couch with a festively decorated comforter she found inside one of the drawers of an old dresser and moved the couch, along with an old television and DVD player, into her little She Space. That’s what she called it, her She Space. When she told her mom the name of her sanctuary, her mom joked that it was really only a Man Cave in disguise. Lucy had not laughed, instead she crossed her arms, rolled her eyes and shook her head saying nothing, then headed back downstairs.

After flipping through her personal stash of DVDs, Lucy popped Swing Time starring Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers, into the DVD player. Swing Time had always been one of her favorite movies. Ever since she could remember, she had longed to dance like Ginger Rogers or even Fred Astaire for that matter. Loving this movie was her secret though. Once when she mentioned how much she enjoyed movies from the World War II era more than current popular movies, one of her friends had called her a dork. She would not make that mistake again.

As she walked back to the couch, her eyes caught sight of an old radio half hidden by various items on a bookshelf on the other side of the basement. As many times as she had been down there, she had never noticed it before. She hit pause on the DVR, walked over and pulled it out. The radio was old yet still in fairly good shape. The dark two-toned brown plastic casing had a few scratches but no damage, and she could see the vibrantly printed station indicators clearly through the large round crystal clear face. Only one set of station numbers were displayed, indicating that this radio dated to before the days of FM. Wow, this thing is really old, she thought. Lucy wondered if it still worked. Well, there’s only one way to find out, and she plugged it into an outlet on a nearby post. After switching the on/off knob to the on position, eerie squeaky sounds along with a lot of static reverberated from the radio’s sole speaker. She turned the knob a bit and suddenly a big band jitterbug melody blared, filling the basement with a lively tune. Lucy thought that odd, however, she reasoned that perhaps the radio station was playing swing songs to get everyone in the mood for the upcoming high school dance. A big grin crept across Lucy’s lips. Dark hair flying, Lucy became swept up in the catchy beat, twirling, kicking her feet and shaking her hips. It did not matter that she had no partner. The steps came naturally and she felt free.

“Lucy, dinner!” It was her mom.

Reluctantly, Lucy turned the radio off, and started for the stairs then doubled back and gathered the old radio into her arms. “I think you need to be a part of my She Space.” She giggled, thinking if anyone had heard her talking to an inanimate object, they would proclaim her crazy.

After shutting down the television and DVR, she visually searched for a place for her new treasure. The end table near the bookshelf would do nicely. After dragging it across the floor, she positioned it next to the couch and set the radio on top. Luckily, the outlet she had plugged the Christmas lights into still had an open plug available. “There you go. Now, if I could only find an escort for the big dance, I’d be in heaven.”

“Lucy! Hurry up, your dinner’s getting cold!”

“Coming, Mama!” Lucy gave the radio an absentminded pat, then hurried up the stairs.

***

The night of the father/daughter dance finally arrived without Lucy finding an escort. After being turned down by both of her uncles, she resigned herself to going alone. She may not have a dance partner, but she could still enjoy watching everyone else and would not miss this event for the world. An old trunk in the basement had yielded a spectacular looking knee-length yellow dress with a cinched waist and flared skirt that had belonged to her great-grandmother. Complementing the skirt, she wore a pair of her great-grandmother’s white lace gloves and white strapped shoes with low chunky heels. Magically, everything fit Lucy perfectly. With her mom’s help, her long hair had been curled to rest gently on her shoulders while the sides wound into two long rolls on top of her head.

“My goodness, Lucy, you look like you just stepped out of an old black-and-white snapshot. In fact, wearing that dress with your hair like that, you are the spitting image of my grandmother.”

“Am I? I’ve never seen any pictures of your grandma. Do you have any?”

“I’ll have to look. I’ll pull out my old photo albums while you are at the dance. Are you certain that you don’t want your brother to escort you?”

“Mom, Eddie is a year younger than me and everyone knows he’s my brother. No. I’m going alone. I’ll be fine.” Lucy knew that she wouldn’t really be fine but she also did not want to go to the dance with her pesky little brother. All of her girlfriends would laugh and make fun of her. They would probably say nothing if they saw her alone since they all knew the story of how her father abandoned his family so many years ago.

“Alright dear. Text me when you want me to pick you up but no later than ten o’clock.”

“Aw, Mom!”

“Ten o’clock young lady, and if you don’t text me, I’ll park the car and come in and get you.”

Resigned to comply with her mother’s wishes, Lucy exhaled loudly. “Okay.”

Since it was the end of the school year, the early evenings were still light and Lucy’s mother had given her permission to walk the two short blocks to the dance. Besides, her best friend, Annie Caldwell, lived right down the street and she had arranged to join Annie and her father so they could all walk to the school together. As she rounded the corner, she caught sight of them waiting for her on their front porch.

Mister Caldwell’s eyes popped as his lips parted in a wide grin. “Jeepers creepers, you look swell!”

Annie wrinkled her nose as she shot her father an annoyed look. “Dad! You’re so weird sometimes.”

Lucy giggled and returned the smile. “Thanks, Mister Caldwell. I appreciate what you said even if Annie doesn’t.” She stuck her tongue out at Annie and they all burst into laughter.

Annie’s father grew serious. “You know, Lucy, I’d be honored to share a dance or two with you tonight. I feel bad that you’ll be there without your own dad. I’m happy to substitute. Is that alright with you Annie? Are you okay with sharing me?”

“Of course I’m alright with it. Lucy is my best friend after all.”

Mister Caldwell’s gesture touched Lucy’s heart, but playing second daughter did not change the fact that she did not have a real father of her own. “Thanks, Mister Caldwell. I really appreciate your offer but you dance with Annie, she’s your daughter. I’m only your honorary daughter.”

Caldwell knew not to press Lucy on such a sensitive issue. “Alright. But if you change your mind or just wanna cut a rug,” he did a little shuffle with his feet, “just find me, okay?”

Lucy nodded. “I will and thanks.”

***

Lucy sipped her cola through a straw as she sat in a cafeteria chair. Except to get her drink, she had not left that chair all night. A large rectangular-shaped area edged with a strip of bright neon orange tape designated the portion of the basketball court used as the dance floor. At one end of the court, a disc jockey wearing a white navy uniform complete with bell bottoms, tie and hat spun 45s, blasting the music of the big band era. Streamers and balloons lined the wire caging around the basketball court along with posters of Rosie the Riveter and Uncle Sam pointing his finger with the caption, I want you, while huge spotlights rotated reds, blues, yellows and greens bathing the entire area in a wash of color. On the dance floor, fathers sporting ducktails and white jackets and girls swathed in multi-folded knee-length skirts bopped and twirled to the beat of popular 1940s tunes.

Completely mesmerized by the atmosphere, Lucy swayed to the music, eyes glued to the dance floor while imagining herself with her own faceless partner on the dance floor. The hours flew by and before she knew it, the disc jockey announced the last dance. Lucy smiled wistfully. Squeezing her eyes tightly shut, she made a silent wish that somehow, she could dance to that last song.

Sensing a presence in front of her, she snapped her eyes open. The young man could not have been more than twenty-five. Sandy haired and slight of build, he wore an army uniform with three stripes on the sleeve of his crisp brown jacket. He said nothing though his smile was kind as he held out his hand. Without concern or thought, Lucy extended her own, allowing him to help her to her feet. She took his arm and they entered the dance floor.

As the music began to play, Lucy’s partner pulled her to-and-fro, sometimes letting go of her hand then tugging her back to him as their feet and arms flew in time with the music. When he launched her body into a spin, she responded naturally and when he lifted her off of her feet, flipped her over his head and then caught her in his arms, neither one of them missed a beat. Lucy became so immersed in the dance that she never saw the crowd pull back. They stood around the perimeter of the dance floor whistling, yelling and clapping their hands while Lucy and her partner gyrated in sync like they had been partners forever. As the song boogied to its closing notes, the soldier hoisted Lucy up and off of her feet then swung her, first to his right, then to his left. He spun her around then bent her over his right arm supporting her back as he leaned slightly over her almost prone body, raising his left arm in the air to coincide with the final note.

Thunderous applause filled the court as the soldier helped Lucy to a standing position. She felt both embarrassed and thrilled at the same time. She turned toward him intending to thank him but he had already begun to make his way through the crowd turning once to touch the brim of his cap in a good-bye gesture then disappeared into the throng of exiting people.

Still dazed by her fairytale ending, Lucy made her way to the front of the school where her mother waited inside the car.

“How was the dance?”

“It was … fine.”

“Just fine?”

“Yeah Mom, just fine.”

“Did you dance with anybody?”

Lucy, still reeling from the experience, did not feel up to sharing with anyone, not even her mom. She decided to change the subject. “Uh, yeah but it was no big deal. Anyway, did you find those pictures?”

“Yes, I did. I found a whole album filled with black-and-whites of your great-grandparents. Before he went off to the war, they apparently loved to go to dances and frequented local dance halls. Such a shame he died during the invasion of Normandy and never got to see his baby daughter, my grandmother. But he died a hero.”

They pulled up in front of the house. Lucy exited the car in silence following behind her mom. When they went inside, Lucy saw that there were a lot of photo albums strewn about the floor. Apparently, her mom had been going through all of them. Still wearing her vintage outfit, Lucy plopped down and picked one of them up.

“That one has pictures of them before they were married but this one,” she opened a cream colored binder and flipped through a few of the pages, “has shots of them dancing. There’s even one with my grandma wearing your dress.”

Lucy took the album from her mom and her eyes grew wide. Shaking her head, she started to mumble, “No, no, it can’t be.”

“What is it, honey?”

Lucy pointed her finger at the sandy haired army sergeant in the photograph dancing with her great-grandmother. “Who is this?”

Lucy’s mom put on her glasses and gazed at the photo. “Why that’s your great-grandfather, Edward. Your brother is named after him and …”

But Lucy had stopped listening. She tilted her head upward and whispered, “I don’t know how you were there, but thank you, Great-Grandpa, I had the time of my life.”

{{~..~}}

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Lisa Criss Griffin: The Beaver War

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The Beaver War

Lisa Criss Griffin

The faint aroma of blooming honeysuckle flavored the evening air wafting through the secluded valley. Steve and Lori breathed in the delightful fragrance from the comfortable wooden bench overlooking the lake by their home. Their gravel drive glistened brightly in the light as it crossed the top of the newly refurbished dam. The couple had spent all their extra savings on the dam repair last year, having almost lost the only road to their house from unprecedented flooding the previous autumn. 

It was now spring, and the new dam had survived the latest challenge of the worst flooding experienced in their area in recent history. Regional newscasters on the radio and TV issued urgent warnings for people living in flood prone areas to seek higher ground immediately, only hours before the storm arrived. 

The roar of the water from the drainage tubes the night of the torrential storm was deafening, and caused Lori to investigate after the bulk of the storm passed by their home. She watched the water screaming straight out of the tubes, disappearing into the darkness beyond the reach of her flashlight that night. The incredible power behind the propelled water would not be evident until the sun came up the next morning. Fortunately, the only damage to their property was the impressive erosion of a forested bank, forty feet beyond the massive drainage tubes extending from the backside of the dam. 

Lori sighed with delight, enjoying the white blooms of clover blanketing the sloping banks of the emerald green lake. She had spent many hours fortifying the banks of the dam with gravel, dirt and seeding it with the clover last fall. Her project had turned out beautifully, and she was thankful they both could finally relax and enjoy their private lake at the end of their workday.

The clouds turned pink, hinting of the approaching sunset. The light banter between the couple abruptly stopped as a large furry head with teddy bear ears glided past them in the water, unconcerned by their presence. The audacious rodent paraded back and forth in front of them, unafraid, as if it was proclaiming ownership of the lake. Steve and Lori watched it swim by them slowly in disbelief.

“What IS that thing, Steve?”

“Hmmmm, it is either a beaver or a huge muskrat.”

“Are you serious? Those things will destroy the banks of the lake!”

“Yep. They are destructive creatures.”

“Eeeeew. Beavers pollute the water with giardia parasites too, which infect people with a nasty diarrhea. That varmint is kind of cute…but Lordy, it has to go!”

“I don’t think we have just one, Lori.”

Another brown head popped up out of the water, carrying a small branch with leaves farther down the lake.

“Oh no! And it is spring. Everything is reproducing right now…including beavers. We have to call a trapper!”

Steve leaned back on the bench, studying the lake.

“Or I can shoot them.”

“Yeah, you could certainly do that until we can get a trapper out here. We can’t afford to wait very long though, Steve. I know you are an expert shot, but who knows how many of those creatures are in there?”

“More than we can see, most likely. I’ll try to locate a trapper tomorrow. In the meantime, I can start picking them off. But, it is getting too dark to hunt tonight. I can start this weekend.”

“Oh Steve, I hate this so much, but we do have to get rid of them! They carry a serious disease and will destroy the new dam.”

“Yeah, baby. They have to go…one way or another.”

The big beaver slid silently through the water by the couple once again, eyeing the drain pipes with more than a passing interest. There was no turning back. The beaver war had begun.

Two days later, any sympathy Lori had for the beavers disappeared. She was weed eating the small, flat peninsula adjacent to the drainage tubes when something unusual caught her eye. She clicked the machine off, laying it in the freshly cut clover. Something was caught in the drainage tubes.

The larger tube had an assortment of tree limbs wedged in the front entrance. Water was still flowing through the tube, but barely. In addition, there was a sturdy wall of branches, leaves and mud built halfway up the entrance of the second, smaller tube. More tree limbs were visible in the low light of the smaller tube, behind the mud dam. 

Lori muttered some choice expletives to herself as she realized the lake level was at least a foot higher than it had been the other day. To make things worse, the forecast was calling for rain later that night. She trekked up the hill to put away the weed eater. Grabbing her work gloves, a rake and a shovel, she made her way back down to the drainage tubes of the lake, still muttering her displeasure out loud. 

A large beaver met her disapproving glare before quickly ducking below the smooth surface of the water. If looks could kill, the beaver would have been instantly incinerated. Lori wished she could vaporize the intruding varmint with a single glance. It would have been quite gratifying.

She began the removal of the limbs from the larger drainage tube. The ends of several of the larger limbs were freshly gnawed. Lori realized they were actually small trees, recently felled by big, naughty beaver teeth. She dragged them all, one at a time, up the side of the dam and thrust them into the gaping maw of the eroded bank forty feet beyond the dam. The dratted rodents had also shoved a significant amount of mud into the waterway leading to the larger tube. Lori raked the dark, rich mud from the channel, filling in uneven spots in the small peninsula by the drainage tubes. It was hard work, but thankfully shade from nearby trees overlooking the lake had crept into her work area.

She stopped, satisfied the larger tube was clear. Leaning against her rake, Lori watched in relief as the rush of water flowed freely through the long length of the construction-grade black plastic tube, spilling onto the concrete pad and down the huge rocks on the far side of the dam. The sound of the re-established waterfall behind the dam was a delight to her ears, and a balm to her soul.

It was now late afternoon, and clouds were beginning to cover the sky. Lori realized she wouldn’t have time to unplug the smaller drainage pipe before dark, so she climbed up the side of the dam and leaned her tools against the large trunk of a cedar tree close to the road. She walked to where the bench overlooked the lake, loath to sit down on it since she was covered in mud and gunk. Her gaze ran across the surface of the lake, immediately locating her nemesis gliding through the water. She glared at it in frustration as it passed her on its way to the other bank. Lori put her hands on her hips defiantly. She had worked too long and too hard on this project to hand it over to a bunch of destructive rodents who had suddenly moved in. The dratted squatters. They had gone too far! This was now a war for their lake. The beavers must die!

And that was how Steve found his bride of many years…hands on her hips, covered in mud and softly chanting something about beavers dying. He smiled to himself, knowing he was about to grant her fervent wish. He knew she didn’t mind getting dirty while working outside, but she sure was a sight this evening. His curiosity stoked, he probed gently for answers.

“Hey, babe. Whatcha doing?”

“Trying to incinerate beavers with a single glance.”

“Oh? Something happen to incur such wrath from my favorite…erm…mud covered Mama?”

“The danged beavers plugged up our drainage tubes, Steve! I spent the last couple of hours unplugging the largest tube. Those varmints stuffed small trees in there, tangling them all together. The beavers actually cut down small trees around our lake somewhere, and floated them down here to clog up our big pipe! I also had to dig out the channel to the big tube since they filled it up with mud. The smaller drainage tube is still completely blocked off with branches, leaves, sticks and mud. I don’t have time to try and clear it before the rain moves in tonight. This is war, Steve! They have got to go!”

The large beaver nonchalantly swam by the couple, unimpressed by Lori’s tirade against his clan’s handiwork. Lori’s eyes narrowed, getting the impression the blasted rodent was mocking her. Another beaver crossed the lake beyond the large rodent, silently dragging a limb with green leaves through the water. 

Lori whirled towards Steve in frustration, stopping short when she saw what he was carrying. Steve smiled at his highly disheveled wife, delighted to join forces with her. He carefully leaned his rifle against the wooden bench and pulled some highly capable looking bullets from his pocket. 

“Why don’t you go in, change clothes and get something to drink while I pick off a few destructive varmints for you, my sweet?”

“Oh, thank you, babe! Thank you!”

“No problem. Happy to be of service.”

Steve loaded his gun, checked the safety and put in his hearing protection. Lori wasn’t even to the front door when he dispatched the big beaver. BOOM! He took a second shot to be sure it died quickly. BOOM! The other beaver ducked under the water, leaving the branch floating in the lake. He sat still, watching for the other beaver. It didn’t reappear that evening.

Lori returned with a couple of drinks, having changed into clean work clothes. 

“Did you get one, Steve? I heard a couple of shots before I could get to the house!”

“Sure did. It is over there by the bank.”

“Oh. I’ve never seen a real beaver up close before. And we probably shouldn’t leave it in the lake if we can get it out. It will just get gross, stinky and plain nasty.”

“I’m done shooting tonight anyway. If you can get it out of the water, I’ll put it in the back of the farm truck and take it up to the Man Field. The coyotes will have a treat tonight. Or something sure will.”

Lori smiled as she retrieved her rake from the cedar tree. The Man Field was her husband’s version of his Man Cave. He did almost all his hunting there. It was surrounded by forest on two sides, and all kinds of wildlife frequented the area. Including major predators. 

The big beaver was floating in the water next to the bank. Lori slid the hefty tines of the metal rake under the body and slid it onto the bank. She was surprised at how heavy the rodent felt as she lifted it into the clover with the rake. 

It had huge, elongated teeth, and short front legs with claws. The back feet were tapered and appeared to be webbed…perfect for swimming. What really interested her was the tail. It was fairly flat, oblong and about a third of the length of the entire rodent. She knew beaver fur was prized, but she didn’t have the skills or the interest to skin and tan the beaver hide. Especially tonight.

Thunder rumbled in the distance as Steve pulled the farm truck down the roadway crossing the dam. He grabbed the beaver by a back leg, carried it up the bank and hefted it into the truck bed. He removed his work gloves, gazing at Lori as she continued to peruse their adversary.

“That thing is huge, Steve.”

“Yeah, I’d say about forty pounds of naughty rodent is going for a ride. I still haven’t heard back from the trapper, so I suppose I’ll come back out here tomorrow if the weather cooperates. Want to join me?”

“Absolutely. I will need to deconstruct that dam across the smaller drainage tube tomorrow in case we have more bad storms.”

Another rumble of thunder sent Lori to the house and Steve on a quick trip to the Man Field. The overnight rain was gentle, and merely washed the pollen from the surface of the lake. Lori spent most of the following afternoon clearing the smaller drainage tube of the beaver build. It was something she didn’t ever want to have to redo. After her shower that evening, she rejoined Steve on the bench, her earplugs and binoculars clasped in her hand. It was less than an hour before Steve was able to dispatch another varmint. 

Their evenings on the bench became a standing date. A trapper promised to come the previous week, but never showed up. The enemy had gotten wise to where the bullets were coming from, and had moved down the lake, away from the dam. Lori was still having to remove branches and mud from the drainpipes. 

Steve decided to erect a blind and began hunting the varmints at the break of dawn. That was successful for a while. He then decided to move to a site farther down the lake, while Lori scouted for swimming rodents from the bench. He was able to take out a couple more from his new site. The amount of material placed by the surviving rodents in the tubing was dwindling significantly. 

The couple sat on their bench, watching for any further signs of the aquatic beasts. It had been several days since Lori had to clear a drainpipe. They were hoping the beaver war was finally over. The sun was beginning to set when Steve spied a rodent head cutting through the water at the far end of the lake.

“I’m going to sneak down there and see if I can get him. Stay here so I know where you are if I fire my gun.”

Lori watched Steve stealthily make his way up the road, crossing the dam and into the forest by the lake. She eventually lost sight of him. She could see the beaver cruising through the water in her binoculars. Dratted things. She hoped the varmints hadn’t caused a lot of damage to the forested lake banks with their burrows. She couldn’t imagine having to deal with a large floating tree in the water from a collapsed bank.

BOOM! The beaver she was watching through the binoculars jerked and flew up out of the water as the liquid around it sprayed in grandiose waves from the power of the bullet. It immediately sank, never to be seen again. Steve picked off one more varmint the following evening. 

The water level of the emerald-hued lake finally stabilized. Any noticeable attempts to plug up the drainage tubes ended. Steve and Lori still keep their regular rendezvous on the wooden bench overlooking their beautiful lake, listening to the soothing sound of the small waterfall beyond the dam. Interestingly, since the beginning of the beaver war, nobody stops by to visit the couple…unannounced. Soon, and hopefully, very soon, Steve and Lori will be able to officially declare the beaver war over. For this year, anyway.

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Stephen Oliver: Anthologies & Genres

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Anthologies & Genres

Stephen Oliver

I’ve decided to talk about two different subjects this time, although they are connected.

Anthologies

Here’s a strange situation.

I’ve written, revised, and edited an episodic novel and three anthologies of dark urban fantasy, science fiction, and horror, with more than one genre and sub-genres often blended into a single story. I have another five collections I’m still working on.

The thing is, publishers and agents, keep telling me that anthologies and story collections are on the way out; no one is interested in either publishing them or reading them, they say. In fact, I ended up writing a space opera novel in an attempt to break into the publishing market. I’m still trying to find an agent or a publisher for that, too.

And yet, I have had eight short stories accepted for seven different anthologies (plus one for a podcast) in the past nine months. Six of them have been accepted in the past four months.

As I see it, there are several advantages of anthologies:

  1. They allow multiple writers to present their work to the public. Getting your name out there can be very difficult for people starting in their writing careers. Anthologies from publishers can be a great way of getting yourself noticed. Writing and publishing credits are extremely useful for showing agents and publishers that you are serious and that you can write.
  2. Even if the anthology has a single author, each story can be an experiment in changing style, viewpoint, structure, etc., allowing the writer to entertain in various ways. From drabbles (100-word stories) to novellas, each story is complete, even though they can also be part of an overarching tale. Think of A Game of Thrones, the first volume of the all-embracing storyline of A Song of Ice and Fire.
  3. They can be specific, where the subject matter of all the stories has a common thread: Cthulhu, Mermaids, Lesbian Ninja Cats, whatever. This “limitation” can be a source of great creativity, I’ve found.
  4. For the writer, it means that you can narrate a story without having to expend huge amounts of thought, time, and effort on plot and character development. You can concentrate on a single event or series of connected events, telling a simpler story. The characters might never appear again, or they could make cameo appearances in other stories, or even be the Main Characters in most or all of the stories.
  5. For the reader, a shorter read can be a great experience. When you’re commuting (remember doing that?), a quick 10-15-minute read is exactly what you want. You don’t have to remember where you are in a novel, and you needn’t go back to the previous paragraph or page to get back into the flow of the story. And you have the satisfaction of reaching the end of the story and experiencing its resolution.

So please don’t tell me that anthologies are on the decline.

Genres

The second theme is what I consider to be the limitations of genres.

Many agents and publishers insist that stories stick within the framework of a specific genre and even a specific sub-genre. And this is where I have a problem.

I write self-help, science fiction, space opera, fantasy, urban fantasy, paranormal, magical realism, horror, fairy tales, fairy stories, slipstream, interstitial, noir, detective fiction, action, thriller, humour, YA, and children’s stories. I sometimes blend more than one into a single story.

For instance, I have a story with a police detective (detective fiction) who is both a psychic and magician (paranormal/urban fantasy) and a cyborg (science fiction). In which genre should it be pigeonholed? Especially since the preceding story is a noir/magical realism blend and the following one an urban fantasy/action blend.

And all of them are part of an urban fantasy/horror/science fiction episodic novel (again, think A Song of Ice and Fire), which also has flashes of horror, humour, and straight fantasy.

How am I supposed to define the novel-length book? Urban fantasy? Science fiction? Speculative fiction? Something else?

A humorous children’s science fiction story? Done it. Lovecraftian humour? Written that, too. A twisted fairytale with a Carollian quirkiness? Yep! These are all from anthologies based in the same narrative universe as the novel.

And, as all of us know, life isn’t neatly sliced into categories. It’s messy and overlaps, blending and merging, splitting apart and diversifying. There are no blacks or whites, merely uncounted shades of colour and grey.

And then there are the crossovers and mixes; Twilight has vampires and shifters (werewolves), for example, which I’ve been told repeatedly are two genres to be kept distinct from one another. People love stories that blend and blur, no matter what the agents and publishers try to sell us.

And that is how I write.

To get around this, I focused on a single sub-genre and wrote the YA space opera science fiction novel I mentioned earlier. Even there, the genre-loving agents and publishers bite me in the backside. One said that my language was too adult for the proposed audience, while another told me that it was too young and infantile a few days later. Go figure.

And remember, these genre divisions are artificial, devised to allow agents and publishers to pigeonhole things so that they can determine whether they will make any money from them.

Sorry if I sound as if I’m ranting, but I’ve just received my 189th rejection since the beginning of this year, from a total of 287 submissions sent during the same period. That’s a rejection rate of 65.9%. It’s only that low because 92 submissions are too recent to have been rejected.

Mind you, as I said at the beginning, I’ve also had two short stories published last year, and another six have been accepted in the past four months. I’m getting noticed, just not as quickly or extensively as I would like.

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About Stephen Oliver

I’m a ‘Pantser’ (aka ‘Discovery Writer’), meaning that I write ‘by the seat of my pants’.

In other words, I have no idea what I’m writing until I’ve written it. Give me a picture or a writing prompt (a sentence, a phrase… heck, even a word will do) and let me loose. I can come up with something in twenty minutes, 400-500 words to create a new story. I don’t stop there, of course. Those few words can turn into four or five thousand, or more. The next day or week, the Muse will strike again, and I’ll finish it off, creating something weird, wonderful or just plain odd.

Once I’m done, then comes the hard part: turning it into something good. I’ve had to learn that what I wrote initially is only the beginning. Read, revise, edit, wash, rinse, repeat. And repeat. And repeat… There are some stories I’ve gone over dozens of times, and I’ll still find something to improve, on occasion.

So it is that I’ve self-published a self-help book, written dozens of short stories, completed a novel, and am still working on two more. My genres cover science fiction, fantasy, urban fantasy, horror, humour (very dark), noir, detective fiction, fairytales and fairy stories. Often more than one in a single tale… Oh, and there’s a second self-help book in the works, too.

I came to writing fairly late in life, but that ain’t going to stop me now. As Harlan Ellison once said, “A writer is some poor schmuck who can’t help putting words on paper.” That’s me, because I’ve already written over a million words since I began. I’ll be done when they peel my cold, dead fingers off my keyboard.

Mind you, given the kinds of stories I write, that will probably be because one of the monsters I created finally finished me off…!

SUCCESS PHILOSOPHIES WITH DR. CHUBACK EPISODE #10

Writers are human and humans require motivation. When we set a goal, the motivation to accomplish our desires is the force driving our actions. For many of us, finding the correct path to follow and maintaining that driving force can be difficult.

In our quest to assist writers in becoming the best you can be and remain motivated, we would like to introduce you to John Chuback, M.D. A cardiovascular surgeon, Dr. Chuback found his goals waylaid by his lack of motivation. In a series of interviews with Paul W. Reeves, host on Impact Radio USA, Dr. Chuback discusses “The 50 most powerful secrets for success in and out of the classroom.”

Please click on the link below to hear Episode #10 in this series, and start enhancing your journey toward success today.

DR. JOHN CHUBACK, a cardiovascular surgeon from New Jersey, joins us in this series to celebrate the release of his book, “The Straight A Handbook – The 50 Most Powerful Secrets For Ultimate Success In And Out Of The Classroom”.

Throughout this series, they will cover each of the 50 chapters in detail, each of which will guide you toward success in all that you do in life.

On this segment, Dr. Chuback and Paul discussed chapters 22 and 23.

Enjoy!

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Previous Episodes of “Success Philosophies With Dr. Chuback”

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Dr. John Chuback

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Dr. John Chuback was born and raised in Bergen County and graduated from the Dwight Englewood School. He earned his medical degree from New Jersey Medical School at UMDNJ, in Newark. Dr. Chuback then completed a five-year General Surgical Residency at Monmouth Medical Center (MMC). Dr. Chuback is the author of Make Your Own Damn CheeseKaboing, and The Straight A Handbook.

All books are available on Amazon. com. 

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Impact Radio USA

Welcome to ​IMPACT RADIO USA, where we strive to  provide the best in news, talk, sports, and music 24 hours a day, 52 weeks per year. Our goal is to keep you as the most informed and entertained Internet Radio audience.

As we are continuing to add content on a daily basis, please feel free to click on the “LISTEN NOW” button at the top of the page to hear us 24 hours a day.While you are here, please check out all of our links to our shows, our podcast page, our blog, and learn how YOU can host your own show with us.  Thank you for listening to IMPACT RADIO USA!!!

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Paul W. Reeves 

Paul W. Reeves is a longtime Detroit area author, radio talk show host, music educator, composer/arranger, and professional musician!

Listen to “Dr. Paul’s Family Talk” on Impact Radio USA and visit Paul’s websitehttps://paulwreeves.com for more information on his books and CDs.

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Paula Shablo: His Time Machine

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His Time Machine

Paula Shablo 

Dan was never the sort of man who discarded items just because they were out of style. The radio worked fine, and so it stayed on the nightstand on his side of the bed throughout many years of our marriage.

It wasn’t the radio that finally gave out—it was the electrical cord. Dan took it to his electrician friend, Salvador, who laughed kindly and gave him a friendly pat on the back before recommending that he replace the old relic. “It would cost more for me to try to replace this—with no guarantee it would work—than it would for you to get a new radio.”

Dan came home with the radio, dejected. “I’ve had this since boot camp,” he told me. “The first time I danced with you, this was playing the music.”

My heart gave a little flutter at that—it was a sweet memory that I had tucked away myself and assumed he had forgotten. It was nice to know he hadn’t.

“It’s not like we don’t have the money,” I told him. “If you want to try…”

“No, it’s okay. I’ll put it in the bookcase with the other time machines.”

I smiled. There were items we’d accumulated over the years that were just, frankly, too pretty to throw away, even when they were no longer useful. Dan called them “time machines” because looking at them took us back to the days when they’d been working parts of our household.

The shelf in question was currently home to an old mixer that had belonged to my mother. It was a pastel blue shade popular in the 1940s, and was displayed with its blades and bowls. It, too, had fallen victim to the dreaded worn-out electrical cord.

Also featured was my old portable record player. It had belonged to my father, who gave it to me. My daughter used it for several years. Finally, it began to overheat and smell—to be honest—dangerous when in use; the turntable no longer spun quite fast enough, causing a dragging drone in the songs she was playing. Dan confiscated it, declaring it a fire hazard and relegating it to the “Time Machine” shelves.

She got a new one as a gift—I forget if it was a birthday or Christmas. That was a long time ago.

As I watched him make a space for his beloved player of music and news, I felt bad for Dan. I determined that I would find him a new radio, one that would be simultaneously serviceable and nostalgic.

It was a bit of a search, but before Father’s Day I received a package containing a vintage-look AM/FM radio. The speakers resembled an old automobile grill. The volume and tuning knobs looked like tail lights. The dial display looked like an old-fashioned odometer.

Personally, I found the looks somewhat marred by the headphone jack—there were no radio headphones in 1955. But overall, I was satisfied with the purchase.

Dan was delighted with his Father’s Day gift. He gave it place-of-honor status by sitting it on the night table on his side of the bed. He plugged it in. “Let’s see how she sounds,” he said, and turned it on.

Hank Williams was singing, his slightly twang-y voice belting out “Hey, Good Lookin’,” much to our delight. There wasn’t much room between the foot of our bed and the chest of drawers, but we managed a dance, anyway.

After listening to a few oldies but goodies, Dan said, “I’ve never heard this station before. It must be new. It’s almost time for the news, though, so I guess I’ll tune in the local guys.”

He turned the dial. Elvis Presley’s rich voice crooned, “Love Me Tender.” Another turn of the dial, and Patsy Cline was walking after midnight.

Dan looked at me. I looked back at him. We looked at the radio. “That’s weird,” Dan said.

Every turn of the dial brought forth songs from the past. Jim Reeves, Eddie Arnold, Perry Como, Loretta Lynn.

“What’s going on here?” I asked.

“Well, honey,” Dan said, “I think you actually found me a real time machine!”

I don’t know about that—we never left the current world. But every night, before going to bed, we danced to the songs of our youth as they floated from the speakers of that radio.

Never once did a song recorded past 1970 play on any station of that radio. No matter the time of day or night, it played our songs.

Time passed, as it always had. Dan became ill and frail. But he loved listening to that radio. When he became mostly bedridden, it played softly, day and night.

Each song held a memory. We talked for hours. We remembered all the good things. Even the harder memories were discussed and let go.

The music played on.

We were listening together the night Dan drew his last breath.

The radio stopped when he did.

A few days later, I unplugged it, believing it was broken.

That was a year ago. Today I took it to Salvador, just to see if it was worth fixing.

He plugged it in.

Switched it on—static. He twisted the tuning dial.

Lady Gaga was belting out “Applause.” The tone was perfect.

“Julia, there’s nothing wrong with this radio,” Salvador told me, frowning.

“That’s what you think,” I replied sadly.

Maybe my daughter would like a new radio. I can’t bear to keep it now.

I’ll be content with the one from boot camp. The one we listened to the first time we danced together. The one on the “Time Machine” shelf.

It won’t play anything now—but I have great memories.

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Enzo Stephens: The Healing Show with Doctor Joe

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The Healing Show with Doctor Joe

Enzo Stephens 

“Good evening America! This is Doctor Joe, and we have finally gone national! So I say again, Hello America, and welcome to the show.

“Some business to get out of the way before we dive in tonight.

“I am Doctor Joe, board certified in psychiatry. However, please understand that I will not dispense clinical diagnoses on our show. That’s not what our time together is about.

“This show is to give you, the Listener, a forum to open your heart anonymously. Most of the time you’ll hear compassion, but yes, there are times when some Tough Love is needed, and I do not shy away from delivering that message.

“You pledge to accept that as a possibility when you call in.

“Now, if we’re all square, let’s pay the bills for a minute and then we can get this show on the road. This is The Healing Show with Doctor Joe, on WAMO radio, and I’ll be right back.”

Butler smacked the ceramic jar out of his hands, and it shattered on the gleaming tiled floor. Mom’s ashes were strewn everywhere amid jagged shards of pottery that bit into the flesh of his massive hands as he tried to gather Mother’s remains; to preserve her, to hold onto her, even if only for just another moment or two. But she was lost, sifting through his splayed sausage-sized fingers with chipped and bitten nails, though some of her ashes mixed with pinpricks of blood that gathered from the wounds inflicted by the unworthy vessel.

Tears flowed freely, also mingling with her ashes as he came to the realization that she was gone. Forever. The one person in this life who loved him despite his fearsome appearance.

He was on his knees, heart utterly shattered as the tears and snot dribbled ceaselessly down his face while the crowd of teenagers stood in stunned silence. Then Butler’s girl Karen Wilkerson tittered nervously, which opened a flood of laughter from the kids. They were entertained for a few more centuries before they turned away; Eggsy and his obliterated soul just a fading memory.

A stream of crimson ants churned their way toward the struggling, tightly-bound teens, and Edgar smirked in the humid morning light as he climbed into his land-yacht. “I hope this hurts you as much as you hurt me, pricks.”

The land-yacht roared to life, and slewed and slung its way toward the curving blacktop that intersected the gravel trail leading to the remote lake. Edgar thought he heard a scream. Maybe he did and maybe he didn’t, but he cherished it nonetheless.

“Our first call tonight comes from Minneapolis. Good evening, Ed. How’s the weather out there?”

“Good evening, Doctor. It’s always cloudy in Minnesota.”

“Is that true about Minnesota or about your current disposition?”

A glutinous chuckle was the response to Doctor Joe’s perceptive question, which immediately set the good doctor on edge. That infamous ‘Little Voice’ — or perhaps it was some kind of sixth sense — began murmuring. “So, what’s on your noodle tonight, Ed?”

“I’m facing a bit of an emotional conundrum.”

“Well, by all means Ed, we are listening.” But it just might be a better idea to stop listening; to shut this guy down before he kicked off his looney-tune festivities for the night. 

Dude was nothing if not a shitload of bad vibes.

“Some teenagers did something to me that was pretty heinous.”

“Kids will be kids. What did they do, TP your house?”

“No Doc. They destroyed my mother.”

For the first time in Joseph Bettis’ recent memory, a caller caused him to be speechless. As Ed’s words sunk in with sledgehammer impact, Doc Joe’s autopilot kicked in. “What do you mean, ‘destroyed your mother’?”

“Her ashes were in an urn. They destroyed the urn.”

Doctor Joe Bettis paused, waiting for Ed to fill in the blanks; dish on the deets, but he offered nada-empanada. The silence was thunderous. “Your mother was in an urn?”

“Ayuh.”

From somewhere in Maine and living in Minneapolis. Okay, that piece of data found its way to Joe’s memory as he continued. “So she was cremated I presume?”

“That’s a fine piece of deductive reasoning, Doc.”

“Want to tell us about it?”

“Sure, but that’s just the back-story. But what the hell…

“A big football type of guy; a bully if truth be told, gathered up his posse and rushed me and shattered the urn. It’s just the kind of crappy thing a black-hearted bully would do, wouldn’t you agree?”

“Well it’s been my exper—”

“A bully is a bully, Doc! You know it as well as I do. And what stops a bully in their tracks?”

“Standing up to them. But it’s HOW one stands up to them that results in either escalation or de-escalation.”

“Yeah.”

“Understanding what motivates a person to engage in that kind of behavior gives one the ability to level the playing field, figuratively speaking.”

Ed might have blown a raspberry at that point in the conversation. “I’ll tell you what levels the playing field, Doc. Here’s the ultimate in de-escalation…”

“Please Ed, I’m sure many of our listeners would love to know how you’ve dealt with this situation.”

“Easy-peezy, Doc. I killed him. And I killed his dumb-as-a-shoelace, wind-me-up-do-me-doll too.”

Twice in one phone call was the good Doctor Joe Bettis struck speechless. His first thought was that this was a crank call; some off-the-rocker crackpot calling to blow off steam, but then he recalled that boogery, glutinous chuckle earlier, and the case of heebie-jeebies this whack-bird gave him, and, well, maybe the dude wasn’t a crank call after all.

Maybe. God I hope I’m wrong; I do NOT need this shit tonight!

“I tell ya, puffing on some superb ganja certainly makes the medicine go down, ya know. Helps to keep a healthy perspective. There’s times when killing someone is damned hard work. That’s not for me, dontchaknow. I want things to go down like a bowl of fine vanilla low-fat yogurt. Smooth as butter. Slick as dog-snot on a doorknob.”

“Good God man, are you serious?”

“Would a bear rip your doink off if you chose to have sexual relations with a jar of honey out in the woods?”

Okay, no question about it, Doctor Joe was losing control of this call. He looked into the production booth to see the engineer making frantic circling motions. Keep the call going

Message received, damnit.

“Okay Ed, I think we’ve ascertained how serious—”

“I’ve got some gold kush right at this very point in time, Doc. All loaded up in my special peace pipe, which, by-the-bye, is chock full of ice and mint leaves to make the puff-a-roni go down nice ’n easy.”

“Ed, you’re smoking marijuana while talking to America this evening?” 

Deep inhalation followed by a protracted exhalation that felt like cobwebs wafting across Joe’s mind. This was surreal.

Hello Master of Understatement!

“Actually I really don’t know if this is gold kush. Could be skunk-weed for all I know. But it’s putting me in the mood for some French toast slathered in dark karo.”

“Look Ed, as entertaining as it may seem to you, I don’t think America’s idea of compelling radio consists of listening to you smoking weed.”

Silence for a second. Then two. Then, “Dead air.”

“What?”

“What’s a sure-fire way to kill a radio station, Doctor?”

“Oh, right. Dead air. We can’t have that going. Of course if that’s what you want to do, we’ll just end the call, Ed. In fact—”

“In fact hell, Doc. You end this call and this young lady here bites it.”

Joe stilled his tongue forcibly, demanding calm before he opened up his pipes. Motion caught his eye. The producer, gesticulating, his mouth moving. Joe was certain that sounds, maybe even actual words were coming out of the guy’s mouth, but it was distant, and Doc Joe simply wasn’t picking up what the guy was laying down.

There was Doc Joe, the headset, and a lunatic on the other end of the call.

“Ed? Do you have someone with you?” Joe felt his voice quiver.

“Doc, I have this… this thing in my heart, man, and it hurts. It hurts me bad.”

Now we’re getting down to the core. “Tell me about that, Ed. That thing you’re talking about.”

A sob. Just one, followed by an abrupt sniffle. “I dunno, Doc. It’s like this… this vacuum inside me; maybe in my heart, maybe in my soul. Maybe like a black hole or something, like in space where it sucks everything inside and no one has any idea where all that stuff goes. But it’s just gone.”

Good Doc Joe felt compassion, even though this guy kind of scared the hair on his back straight. “Ed, did you feel like this at all before that incident with your mother?”

“Bastard!” 

Fumbling, rustling noises, as if the phone became a hot potato against Ed’s ear. A muffled scream, then Ed, suddenly savage and snarling, “I’ll kill you bitch!”

“ED! Ed? Calm down Ed, talk to me, please. Don’t hurt her!”

Heavy breathing, sounds of a girl with a hunk of sock or something stuffed in her mouth.

The producer was seated at his console, staring at Joe with dinner plates for eyes. Joe snared a black Sharpie and scribbled on a notepad, then held it up for the producer to see. It said:

Call 9-1-1.

Google his phone number

Right. As if THAT would work.

“Ed?”

“Yeah, I’m here, Doc. Getting harder and harder to keep that under control. But I’ve got to, right. Losing one’s temper makes one… sloppy. And that’s a damned good way to get caught, which is not my idea of a cuppa chamomile, if you know what I’m saying.”

“Ed, let me ask you again; do you have someone there with you?”

“Ayuh Doc, I do.”

“Is it a girl, Ed? A woman?”

“Durn tootin she is, Doc. But if you want, I can turn her upside down to be sure. She is wearing a skirt—”

“That’s not necessary, Ed, I’ll take your word on that. Now Ed…”

“Go for it, Doc.”

“Is she with you of her own volition?”

“Well, she kinda is, Doc. I mean, she fell asleep on me. Of course the sleeper choke I put on her sort of induced that response.”

Joe was struck by Ed’s earlier admission of some kind of thing inside him that felt like a black hole in his soul, and while that did not sound like a good thing at all, at least Ed could be salvaged. Even though he said he killed before, for some reason that didn’t seem true…

“Ed, what’s the girl’s name?”

“How would I know?”

“Tell us what she’s wearing, Ed.” Joe knew that he had to make his captive more than just a captive, he had to personalize her to Ed. That’s how the girl would live past this night. Or—”

“She’s dressed like a cheerleader, Joe. You’d like her too. Blond, willowy. Nice and young and firm. I personally think she’s a little underdressed for the weather, but you know how kids today are.

“If I was into meaningless boinking, she’d be dancing with me by now.”

Jeez.

“Why, Ed? Why are you doing this?” 

“She knows, Joe. You can see it in her eyes. She was one of them that laughed.

“Wanna know what she’s wearing, Joe? Well this might sound pretty bad, but what the hay. I’ll tell everyone anyway. She’s wearing a bear-trap, Joe.”

“Wha—”

“Hells bells yes. It’s a Duke number 16 offset — that’s where the teeth are offset from each other. Didja know that, Joe? Did you pick any of that valuable info up in your board certifications?”

That’s it! This call needs to—

“So here’s the deal, Joe. If you go to a commercial break. SNAP! If you hang up this call. SNAP! If you piss me off…”

“Snap?”

“Ayuh. Now you’re jing-jing-jingling along with the program, Doc.”

“Ed. Tell me what you want.” Joe was walking a tightrope here and he felt it as he struggled to modulate his voice.

“Well, honestly, I’m feeling a strong urge to do some confessing, but if I do that very thing that just might make my soul feel even a smidge better, well that would be like giving the keys to the candy store away to the kiddies.

“There’s a whole bunch of super-smart folks working police investigations, and me dropping a name or a location or two, well those fine folk would put two and two together and before you know it, I’d be on the run. The lam. It sounds a whole lot better than it is, Joe. Can you dig what I’m feeding you here?”

Just gotta keep him talking; distracted. The producer was making those circling motions again, but truth be told, this exchange, this little foray into Whackoville was exhausting. 

He stopped with the circular motions and held up a notepad of his own, upon which was written,

Cops are coming. Keep him on the line.

“Joe? Doc?”

“Yeah, yeah.” 

“That Duke number 16 is resting across her shoulders; clavicle to clavicle. It looks like when it snaps shut, it should go into her neck just below the jaw. She’s got a long neck.”

“No, Ed, don’t. Just talk to me—”

“—That’s the tooth on the front. Should penetrate above the esophagus, which is bad enough. I mean, if that were all there was, it would be pretty bad for her. Can you imagine the damage? It just might kill her in and of itself!”

“Ed, please. There’s no reason for that girl to die. All life is precious.”

“But remember I said this is an offset trap? The opposing teeth are off to either side of that front one. Both would slice through the sides of her neck and she’d bleed out pretty fast. We don’t want that.”

“Ed?”

“Do we?”

“ED?”

“No, she needs to go slowly; needs to feel the HURT—”

“ED!!! STOP!”

“DON’T TELL ME WHAT TO DO YOU SUNOFA—”

SNAP

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